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Dear Peter,
I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
I have been learning English for two years and I hope to find an English pen friend so that I can get more improvement. Can you help me to find one?
Id like to have a boy, who is of my age and is fond of traveling and sports, to be my pen friend. In my opinion, people of the same age often have something to exchange. Thats why I want him to be of my age. If he likes doggy, that would be better because I can tell him something about my little doggy.Id be very thankful if you can help me. Hope to hear from you!
Best regards,
Li Hua
名师点评：
从整体上来说，本文写得还是符合要求的，内容完整，要点和结构也很齐全。语言的使用不在于华丽的辞藻而在于其一些复杂句子的组织。最值得我们学习的就是像好词和好句中列举的表达法。全文流畅而连贯，适合于模仿。
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好词1.improvement n 改进2.do sb. a favor 帮助某人3. doggy n.小狗
好句1. Id like to have a boy, who is of my age and is fond of traveling and sports, to be my pen friend.我想寻找一个和我年纪相仿，喜欢旅游、体育的男孩来做我的笔友。
好处：of my age 年纪相仿；be fond of 喜欢。
2.Thats why I want him to be of my age，这就是为什么我希望笔友跟我年纪相仿的原因。
好处：用why引导的从句做表语从句。
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