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万学海文名师墨东博独家考前作文押题
写实派
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As is illustrated/depicted /conveyed/revealed/betrayed/shown in the picture, (图的内容 原则上用一个主从句表达, 功底.两句合一句的途经,1 AND连结2 WHICH或WHEREAS 连结3 非谓语 )the two pet neighbors greet each other politely and amicably ,whereas (=WHILE/ON THE OTHER HAND)the two pets’ owners seem to ignore each other. Simple as it is, the drawing renders us pondering awefully. (凑字数,其富余时,可省去)Accordingly, what this far-reaching/thought-provoking picture depicts reflects a common phenomenon in today’s society:(反映的现实) pets, rather than/instead of people around them, are such an indispensable part in their daily life to the point where (加以讲解) they are excessively/inordinately(负面词汇,作者的态度尽在不言中,回避使用 I BELIVE,I THINK 之类的句式) fond of their beloved animals while neglecting those who care them, which has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. It goes without saying that its symbolic meaning that (主题句,尽量避免使用1 主系表 2 THERE BE结构 主张使用下列句型,1 NOTHING+BE+ADJ+THAN+TO+DO 2 ON NO ACCOUNT CAN WE 3 IT IS TIME +S +V-ED 4 IT 无主句) indifference should be cleared up among people, with the harmonious society echoed vigorously nowadays in China ought to be weighed /taken/pondered seriously./earnestly/conscientiously
Why do we lay emphasis on this(指代词表过渡) several points(名词复数,总分总的标志) analyzed below might equip us with the deeper understanding of what we are heading for. For one thing,(分述标志词) since we have to live on an on-the-move lifestyle , we are denied chances to share our feelings with our friends and relatives. For another (分述标志词), with so many dishonesties going around in our life and then indifference occurring, we might have no choice but to enjoy the company of pets. And above all(分述标志词), too many tragedies - seeing someone in mortal danger without lifting a finger to save him- put on the stage in our daily life almost everyday, No better illustration of this idea touched on above can be maintained/taken/weighed than the case as listed below,( 例证)a crowd of people remained appallingly nonchalance(=indifference,论据是论点的具体体现,主题核心词汇重复) to the plea of a mother, since she failed to offer the required amount of cash as a price to save her drowning son, the woman at last watched her son sink to death.. Consequently/Accordingly/On balance/Therefore/It follows that, no issue in china is as basic to build up the society in harmony as ironing out indifference among people.(此句为小节,1 与TS首尾呼应,重复原则grow out of=clear up 2 为第三段起势)
Judging from what has been argued above, people have come to realize the harms of indifference has been , like Pandora’s box, the crippling force of establishing the harmony society. It is , therefore, necessary that some effective steps be made to(点主题 重复原则) narrow and bridge the gap among people. To begin with,(以法治国) the government should make law to establish the society in which people live in harmony. In addition,(以德治国) people should enhance the awareness of concern and care each other especially. Only by undergoing these measures, can we make our society, where people ,even not knowing each other, help among them ,appeal to everyone.
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As is illustrated/depicted /conveyed/revealed/betrayed/shown in the picture, (图的内容 原则上用一个主从句表达, 功底.两句合一句的途经,1 AND连结2 WHICH或WHEREAS 连结3 非谓语 )a lady and a gentleman are watching an artificial scene on the top of a building with numerous tower blocks surrounding them. (=WHILE/ON THE OTHER HAND) Simple as it is, the drawing sets us thinking too much. (凑字数,其富余时,可省去)Accordingly, what this far-reaching/thought-provoking picture depicts is a common phenomenon in today’s society,(反映的现实) too many man-made projects such as skyscrapers have excessively been built, whereas too much natural resources including afforested land has vanished appallingly. (加以讲解) (负面词汇,作者的态度尽在不言中,回避使用 I BELIVE,I THINK 之类的句式). There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning that (主题句,尽量避免使用1 主系表 2 THERE BE结构 主张使用下列句型,1 NOTHING+BE+ADJ+THAN+TO+DO 2 ON NO ACCOUNT CAN WE 3 IT IS TIME +S +V-ED 4 IT 无主句)it is imperative to check the blind actions and activities of human beings in the urban development ,with nowadays values of scientific development echoed vigorously .
why do we lay emphasis on this(指代词表过渡) ? several points(名词复数,总分总的标志) analyzed below might help us gain an insight into the dramatic change to which we have been qualified to bear witness. To begin with,(分述标志词) over the past decades, much arable land has been destroyed in the rush for rapid urban development. Such blind development has damaged the natural balance to the point where people only live in a box of lifeless cement and steel. What is more, most people still lack the concept of scientific development. Some urban planners and designers focus their attention simply on their immediate interests and problems ,which has in turn degraded wrethchedly the quality of our living environment. As many famous ecologists point out that a cluster of high-rise buildings in a city often overburden living capacities, which once could afford to residents enough.( 例证) Consequently/Accordingly/On balance/Therefore/It follows that, no issue in china is as basic to give an expression to inherent spirit of scientific development as restraint unbridled urban development.(此句为小节,1 与TS首尾呼应,重复原则)
Judging from what have been argued above, people have come to realize the harms arising from indiscriminate development has been, like the Pandora’s box, the crippling force of following the values of scientific development. It is , therefore, necessary that some effective steps be made to(点主题 重复原则) lay much emphasis on the harms from blind development at the expense of the balance of ecosystem . To begin with,(以法治国) the government should make law to channel construction to the track of values of scientific development , for, if not, our descendants would be thrown into unexpected crises. In addition,(以德治国) people should enhance the awareness that environmental problems can not be separated from those of human welfare and from the process of economic development in general. Only by undergoing these measures, can we make our society, where birds are singing and flowers are giving forth their fragrance here and there, appeal to everyone.
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2008年考研英语作文范文写实类，请同学们参考冲刺班“冷漠”范文的模版。
As is illustrated/depicted /conveyed/revealed/betrayed/shown in the picture, the two disabled persons whose crippled legs are bound together do a lot of traveling. Simple as it is, the drawing sets us thinking too much. Accordingly, what this far-reaching picture depicts reflects a common phenomenon in today’s society: the people in our society who are in the dark want to turn the corner but they can not succeed by themselves respectively and in turn they have to choose to pull together in times of trouble It goes without saying that its symbolic meaning that no matter what difficulties we may face when we work or study we should help each other, with the harmonious society echoed vigorously nowadays in China.
Why do we lay emphasis on this? Several points analyzed below might equip us with the deeper understanding of what we are heading for. On one hand, since we have to live on an on-the-move lifestyle, we may encounter this or that plight, where we would be at a loss to do anything other than to need others assistance. On the other hand, if we do not offer help each other when we confront dilemma we would not realize our dream.. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the case as listed below, 69 people were caught in an unfortunate mine accident in Henan province several months ago, they survived incredibly owing to their mutual help at last.. Consequently, no issue in china is as basic to build up the society in harmony as coordination in face of disaster
Judging from what have been argued above, people have come to realize the values of mutual aid has been the driving force of establishing the harmony society. It is , therefore, necessary that some effective steps be made to advocate spirit of supporting each other To begin with, the government should make law to encourage people to unite together to overcome difficulties. In addition, people should enhance the awareness of caring each other especially when they were young. Only by undergoing these measures, can we make our society, where people, even not knowing each other, help among them ,appeal to everyone.
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As is illustrated in the picture, a student is surfing on the net bar who, even after midnight, is still playing cyber games, while the text books scatter on the desk. Simple as it is, the picture really sets us thinking.. Accordingly, the fact that students being on the rise spent their spare time playing computer games such as CS has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning that it is imperative to prevent them from indulging in CG ought to be taken seriously.
To account for the above-mentioned case, several effects arisen from CG should be put forward. To begin with , taking to CG too much impair players’ health especially eyes, just like being betrayed in the picture. In addition, students on line often pretend to be what they want to be and cheat each other. Moreover, the growing number of students neglect their studies, idle away their time and even commit crimes thanks to CG., which is threatening situation we are unwilling to see. No better illustration of this idea mentioned before can be thought than the example as listed below, a student, who wanted to play CG but had little money , hence, made a reckless move to waylay and rob. CG, in some sense, is just like Pandora’s box, which gives rise to some undesirable results unexpectedly. Therefore, no issue is as crucial to individual and national survival and prosperity as bringing CG under control in China.
Obviously, from what have been argued above, if we are blind to this problem, those who are experiencing these problems will be exposed to danger. it is necessary that some effective steps be carried out to check CG. On one hand, it is demanding for the government to make law to ban CG full of sex and violence on sale. On the other hand, we should assume our responsibilities and spare no effort to bring home people the awareness of harms concerning CG. Only by undergoing these measures, can we make our youths live in healthy life style, which has just gone to the heart of building up the cordial society .
B抽象派
B1-1主题宽泛型
As is vividly betrayed in the picture in front of us, it is like a bridge that bridges various gaps to be a road. Just like being conveyed in the set of drawing, the fact that the bridge stands for communication and the gully for misunderstanding among people nowadays profoundly indicates that communication plays an increasingly crucial role and becomes perhaps the only effective approach to disputes, with the world being considerably diversified.
To the popular mind, nevertheless, it is immediately assumed that when communication is argued , it is still communication among the old and the young generation .that is meant. In order to account for what has been mentioned before, several causes should be put forward. On one hand, always rebellious , young people are seemingly turning to be rather odd while their parents are quite embarrassed ,or even unbearable to see all these offbeat behaviors. On the other hand, children may deem parents to be conserved whereas parents may assume that the young are getting wild. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example discussed below, 例证.Consequently, no issue in china is basic to individual and national survival prospect as communication, though people bear colorful thoughts, behaviors and customs.
Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive some positive meanings from this thought-provoking picture. It is, therefore , necessary that efforts be made to communicate. To begin with, actually, given effective communication, parents will understand that young people are not mad but merely seeking for an identity in this colorful world and the young will reconsider their behavior and accept reasonable suggestions from their parents. And above all, the best way to communication is to learn to be a little more tolerant and treat difference as variety instead of discord and rebellion. Only by undergoing these measures , can we establish the society in which people live with good intentions toward others, which ,as we know, has just gone to the heart of building the society in harmony.
B1-2 主题抽象型
Honesty
Can the good honesty days be back to return somebody askes. Indeed, the question itself has aroused great concern and its implication should be given deeper consideration. The fact that dishonesty going around everywhere has made us have no choice but to need dwelling upon that proverb, which goes : Honesty is the best policy.
It must be pointed, nevertheless, that when it comes to the honesty , honesty of enterprise nowadays should still be taken more seriously. To begin with, if your company wants to win the trust and respect from consumers, you have to be honest. People are ready to love those who take honesty as their cardinal principle, whereas a liar company is not believed even no matter what he says well. In addition, if a company wants to make it especially during the fierce competition, the first qualification is honesty. No better illustration just mentioned before can be weighed than the case as listed below, 例证.Accordingly, no issue is as basic to a enterprise survival and prosperity as following the spirit of honesty.
Obviously, from what has been argued above, efforts should be taken to build up the honesty-oriented society, or else we will be exposed to danger. For one thing, it is imperative for the government to make law to punish those who produce the the inferior and fake goods and prize those who turn out inexpensive but of fine quality commodities. For another, we should spare no effort to bring home to people the value of honesty. Only by undergoing these measures, can we say those good honesty days will be back.
B1-3主题之大而言之型
国有企业
As is vividly depicted in the picture , with a clear cracking sound , two bowls clashed into each other , in which the shinning one keeps its integrity , whereas the shabby one breaks into pieces. Just like being symbolically revealed in the set of drawing, the fact that the intact bowl, as a symbol of soly-invested companies , overwhelms the broken bowl representing the state-owned companies, with collision standing for fierce companies, profoundly indicates that it is time that our state-owned companies entailed reform especially after china’s entry into WTO when facing soly-invested companies abroad.
To the popular mind , it is immediately assumed that when reform in state-owned companies is argued ,it is car industry that is meant. To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon , several points should be figured out. For one thing, some of car industries once enjoyed the glorious past , They have ,however, gradually lost their market shares when soly –invested companies were sweeping into domestic market. For another , in order to turn the corner ,the leaders of them should adopt the policy of reform such as acquisition, re-engineering and introduction of advanced technology and concepts of management. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below, No 1 Motor Vehicle Plant has witnessed from predicament to rejuvenation through none other than effective steps mentioned above. Therefore ,no issue is as critical to individual and national survival and prosperity as reform in state-owned companies.
Accordingly , it is vital for us to derive some positive meanings from this thought-provoking picture. It is ,hence, necessary that efforts be made to follow the spirit of reform concerning state-owned companies. On one hand, the government should make law to perfect irrational rules and regulations being visible in reform process. On the other hand, the leaders of state-owned companies should enhance the awareness of reform .Only by undergoing these steps ,can our more state-owned companies become members of Top 500 in the world, which, indeed, has gone to the heart of maintaining good momentum of national economy growth.
c图表文+图文写实
P1(图表) As is depicted in the pie/table /chart, the investors in different enterprises come from 26 countries and regions.(图表标题) According to the pie/table /chart, Hong Kong investment ranks first ,accounting for 44 percent of total. Japan investment makes up 19.2 percent , putting it in second spot. Third is United States at 16 percent.(数据描述) Obviously, it goes without saying that Beijing has made remarkable results in attracting foreign business to invest in joint ventures, especially after China’ entry of WTO.(主题句)
P2(图文写实)It can be easily proved , hence, that Beijing ,one of biggest cities in China, does benefit a lot from outside investment.(主题的延伸或结果) Several points analyzed below might help us gain an insight into this dramatic change to which we have been qualified to bear witness. In the first place, a large number of joint ventures have been set up , which contributes greatly to the development of Beijing economy. In the second place, the foreign-invested enterprises offer a lot of jobs to the residents in Beijing. This in turn relieves the burden of laid-off workers in the city. In the last place, the high-tech enterprises in the Beijing will mushroom rapidly as Beijing enjoys the identical preferential policies as coastal cities open to the outside world. Consequently, no issue is as basic to give impetus to economy of a city just like Beijing as drawing the support from foreign investment.
P3(通用)Judging from what has been argued above, we have come to realize that the value of foreign investment has just gone to the heart of economy growth of the city. It is necessary that efforts be made to extend the introduction of foreign investment. For one thing, concerning law and regulations should be made to improve the investment environment. For another, we should enhance awareness of availing ourselves of every chance to run the present foreign –invested enterprises efficiently. Only by undergoing these measures, can we make our more cities like Beijing become modern metropolis and take the strong position among the powers of the world.
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建议信+倡导信(时事类)
某报社向广大读者就如何开展普及奥运英语口语培训的建议,你作为一读者就相关问题展开讨论.
To Whom It May Concern,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to launch the popularization of oral English training for the Olympic Games in 2008.
On receiving your consultation, I have been pondering and now come up with some conductive suggestions as follows. To begin with, we should cast light upon the fact that everything concerning Olympic Games has played a key role in this training. That is to say , every detail of content taught in this training should manifest its application especially for Olympic Games from reception to send-off ceremony. In addition, this training should take into account various cultures and traditions and in turn be achieved through teaching progress. And above all, we should spare no effort to bring home to trainees , through this training ,the value of making Beijing an international city in the proper sense of this word.
I would be ready to discuss with this matter o further details.
Truly yours
Li Ming
建议信B(生活学习类)
Dear John,
You asked for advice concerning whether you should study history or computer science at university .I will try making some suggestions.
University is preparation for your career. You should consider studying a subject which will best equip you to earn a living . Computer science offers more job opportunities than history. We are now in a high-tech age. For the gilding future , it would be necessary for everyone to be equipped with computer skills merely to be breadwinner.
Of course, you do not have to devote all your time at university to learning computers and nothing else .I would recommend that you continue reading history in your spare time. That way , you will find that your leisure hours are enriched while you prepare yourself for a could-be career in computer science.
Whatever you decide to do , good luck with your studies.
Truly yours
Li Ming
投诉信(商务类)
Dear Manager,
Much to my regret, I write this to place a complaint against your delivery in your company.
The Sam tape recorder numbered JB/47 which I ordered from your company on January 19 , arrived yesterday. I am sorry to report that the recorder has been badly damaged. There was no unusual damage to the packing case, but when I opened it, I found that the lid of recorder had been cracked and that the front surface of the machine had been scratched .
Since there was such damage to the goods, I decided to file a complaint against the delivery service. Would you please let me know whether I should return this recorder to you for a replacement or if you have an authorized service representative here to which I should take it .I will hold onto this recorder until I hear from you .
Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
Truly yours
Li Ming
推销信(商务类)
January 20,2007
Dear Ms Lewis:
I am a sales representative of Gome Electronic Warehouse. I am writing to find if you are interested in a new high-tech house system which our company has just distributed.
The system is easy to be controlled by house holder and hard to be destroyed. The system protects your house round the clock.
If you would give me 10 minutes of your valuable time ,I could demonstrate you the effectiveness of the new alarm system. You have no obligation to buy, but if you decide to order, the installation fee will be waived.
If you are interested , please call toll-free 1-800-8207-3660 and I will be more than happy to do a demo at your house.
Truly yours
Li Ming
抱怨信+呼吁信(生活学习类)
Dear President,
I am an undergraduate in the School of Education. I have several concerns about the quality of teaching in our university.
I have discovered recently that very few our instructors are full professors; in fact, this year all of our four courses I am taking are taught by either part-time professors or assistants.
I am not saying that the part-time instructors are not good teachers , but they have their limitations. They have no offices. As a result , they can not assign office hours for students. They are not well informed of many school regulations and events since they only come during class hours. They have little time to hear our questions and give advice for they have neither space nor time for us.
Considering the fact that we pay big bucks t attend this university , don’t we deserve some good teaching I am looking forward to your reply.
Truly yours
Li Ming
备忘录(商务类)
A MEMO
To: Dr. David Smith
From: Li Ming
Re: Luncheon Welcome Professor William
Date: January 20,2007
This is a reminder of the invitation to a luncheon to welcome Professor Tom William and his delegation of senior professors and researchers from New York University to the Computer Science and Technology Department of Tsinghua University. During the luncheon, Professor William will make a presentation to the students and teachers from the colleges and universities in Beijing.
The luncheon is scheduled for Tuesday, January 23,2007 at 12 p. m , at the Banquet Hall of the International Academic Exchange Center on East Campus.
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