本题属于漫画类，画的是一只下蛋的母鸡，可笑的是母鸡手中拿着一份承诺书，旁边还有一首诗对漫画的内容进行了讽刺。对于漫画类题型，考生注意对漫画的描述不是最重要的，与之相比，揭示出其中的深刻寓意更为重要。本题的提纲要求两点：第一点是写出漫画所包含的信息；第二点是给出评论。总的说来，第一点是相当固定的，考生只要对漫画进行简单描述就可以了。需要提醒的是我们应着力描写母鸡手中的承诺书，而不需要将旁边的诗进行逐句翻译，不过诗歌的题目倒是可以借鉴——《如此承诺》，因此考生可以将本文的题目写成如My View on Socalled Promises等。提纲的第二点为考生留出了很大的想象的空间。诚信问题一直是社会热点问题，相信考生写作都会有很多的思路，只要选择自己能够驾驭的语言将其意义揭示出来，并发表自己的看法即可。考生可以从此种承诺产生的原因，和此种承诺的危害性等方面进行扩展。
二.经典范文赏析
As can be seen from the cartoon, a hen is making promises that her eggs are all round and consist of shells, egg whites and yolks. We all know that hens duty is to lay eggs, but she promises what she should do! In our daily life, many people, just like the hen, keep making such promises in which they take duties and responsibilities as virtue to be proud of.
Such promises, I think, come into being mainly for two reasons. First, some profit-driven enterprises take advantages of such promises to win peoples trust; however, their advertisements are merely misleading and cheating. Second, some of organizations and individuals that have good fame are by all means politicizing their deeds, but actually they just do what they should do.
In my opinion, doing more is better than promising more, since people are willing to be served sincerely. What we should lay more emphasis on is what we do and how we can virtually improve the level of service. Only in this way can we make people satisfied with what we do.
